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Close your screen; there's no one there
Darkness holds you with hands of air
Don't move an inch or the magic is broken
Don't say a word or you'll wish you hadn't spoken
This perfect time of night is it
There's nothing left but to quietly sit
Darkness holding tight and close
It wasn't silence you willingly chose
Your heart has fallen to the dusty floor
Your mind is broken beyond restore
But this darkness saves you from any fall
This darkness hides you from them all
Then car lights shine through broken panes
Quickly lighting all that remains
The magic breaks; gone and done
Then nothing shows, even dark has withdrawn
In grudging silence you softly tread
Those words inside, still unsaid
Now in bed, there is much amiss
But as it's inside you must dismiss
For the darkness saves you from any fall
This darkness hides you from them all
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I don't know... I haven't been able to focus on something for weeks. There's no way I can write a decent description right now.
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~FallenfromtheStarz Aug 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Darkness holds you with hands of air<---------Fav line.Very well done.I love the rHyme scheme to it and how fluid it is.
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~MisoBunny Aug 9, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you very much!
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